文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。
When I was a little girl,there's a new classmate who named Meiju is my best friend .She is a clever and pretty girl,she always took much happy to me .we came to school and gone home together everyday.But the happy time is short ,she came back to hometown later ,and we lost the connection from that time . I miss her very much.