英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 小学英语> 一年级英语> 模拟题> 小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7152
要求:
描述我的新老师。
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

My mother hired a tutor to teach me history when I was three years old. I think that he might be an enthusiastic man in while I meet with him firstly.He has a square face with no moustaches on it.He is a learned person in Chinese, but I am very tired of his endless historic chatting.such a classic story that every parent wants their kid to be an handsome boy. So studying protocols is the best way to show elegance. But maybe I was not talented in learning history, I showed less interest and finally, my mother had abandoned her dream. Now I am very interested in painting, I will paint many pictures when I am free. My teacher spoke highly of me when she took a look at my works. My mother has realized that I found my talent and she felt happy for me.

会员评论0个评论)
jmy648
金币:5

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:78.095113577

人气:40发布:2015-08-22

得分:77.5hahawanderful

人气:47发布:2015-06-18

得分:77.5没事瞎转悠

人气:59发布:2016-05-17

得分:77.0wangzhihong1972

人气:39发布:2016-06-03

得分:72.5carolssy

人气:53发布:2014-10-23