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I will enjoy the summer vacation very much. I make summer holiday plan for me . In the first place , I want to have a good sleep,because I have to stay up late for a long time.After that,i will finish my summer homework.So that I can rest assured for the next step.Then, I will go to apply for a part-time job.I think this is a kind of exercise for me. In the end, i want to prepare for the new term.
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