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Life and death.In the movie,a sentence is where there is life,there is hope.It really let me shock.Even in the face of life and death all day,still do our best to live,nobody give up their hope,only think desire and I want to live. Under the rule of the nazis in Poland in 1939,the ss have isolated rule against jews.German businessman oskar schindler to German rule of Keakow,opened a enamel plant,production of military supplies.With outstanding social skills and a lot of money,and German schindler has established the good relations,his factory hire jews,war killing.In 1943,Krakow jews suffered terrible holocaust,saw it all,schindler was a great shock,he bribed officers,make own factory affiliated to the concentration camp boot camp,in the slaughter of those crazy days,his factory has become the refuge of the jews.In 1944,the eve of Germany’s defeat,action more crazy slaughter of jews,schindler gear on officers,1100 people on the list,ruin bought the jewish life.In those fark days,savr a person,is to save the world. The held of the film is Oskar Schindler.He is a successful businessman.He is a bad man,using the German war,slavery jews as factory workers free of charge.He is a kind man,rethink the meaning of life and run out of his life savings to redeem the jews.He is a man to be remembered.War makes people become darkness.But why Schindler can be a hero?I think it is goodness and love in his heart.So when people are so blind jealous evil,he brave to stand out,with no saved 1100 jews. The beginning of the war,we can claim for the sake of national pride,but the war is endless carnage and slightly away,in the most dark war of words to describe too much,is the product of interest is always labeled as justice.I live in a peaceful age,no,in peaceful and material prosperity,from unknown life hard,not to mention the wars and killings.Won’t feel fear and anxiety,more is through the film feel unable to tell period in Chinese history.Silent weeping is the expression of my inner repression.I want to say,was born in a world of peace,and happiness really appreciated.