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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9030
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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As is vividly depicted in the picture above, a student told his teacher that "once i learn how to use Google,isn't that all the education i really need?" Seen from the picture, i think that Google is just a tool,we can't rely on it. And everyone should know that education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. There are three reason to explain. First of all, getting education can boarden our horizons,which can make us more intellecure. Secondly, it's our duty to getting education,not only learn something from interner,but also learn from teacher, learn from eveyone who around you. Last but not least, seach for the information from the internet which is just an information.The most importmant is the way that you study. In conclusion,we should learn by oueself,not just searching for the internet.

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