单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;采用了一些简单的从句。
Dear: I appreciate to invite you to visit my hometown, it is also a good chance to introduce my family to you. there are lots of farmland and rivers in my hometown, the people in my hometown are very loyalty, air is quite fresh, the path near the farmland is interesting. thanks