十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强;简单句偏多了;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Dear Xiaolu, Thanks for your invitation. Your family are so kind and friendly to me,I really appreciated. During the National Holiday, you take me visit many wonderful place. Your hometown's landscap impressed me deeply. Thanks again. And here I sincerely invite you to my hometown as a guest. I'm Looking forward to your reply.