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Dear John, How are you. This is Tom,the sales general manager of Fox Electronic Company. I am writing to inform you that the date of meeting is on the June 20th. The meeting outline is about the launching of new product and the promoting activity of the advertisement.Hope your project special to attractive the eyes of us. I hope we can establish a long term cooperate relationship Yours sincerely Tom