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Dear John, How are you. This is Tom,the sales general manager of Fox Electronic Company. I am writing to inform you that the date of the metting is on the June 20th. The meeting outline is about the launching of new product and the promoting activity of the advertisement.Hope your project caught our eyes I hope we can establish a long term cooperate relationship Yours sincerely Tom