文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Dear John, How are you. This is Tom,the sales general manager of Fox Electronic Company. I am writing to inform you that the date of the meeting is on the June 20th. The meeting outline is about the launching of new product and the promoting activity of the advertisement.Hope your project caught our eyes I hope we can build a long term cooperative relationship Yours sincerely Tom