拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@ 163.com Date: June 10th Subject: our meeting Dear Mr. Driscoll, I’m the general manager of Sales Department in Fox Electronic Company. I’m honored on behalf of our company to inform you that our meeting is scheduled on June 20th. The launch date of the new product and advertising campaign will be discussed then. Please let me know if this would be convenient for you or contact me to offer your arrangement. Wish to establish long-term cooperative relationship with you. Best regards, Tom Smith