2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分高级词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

As can be vividly depicted in the picture above , there are so many people who are crossing the street looking at therir cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Seen from the picture, I can't help thinking that what the truthly mean of using our mobile phone. we can benefit a lot from mobile phone, like call or text someone easily, and when we feel tired, we can through playing games to relax ourself. But we can't oversuing it. There are two reasons to explain. First of all, people who play phone games out of control, they won't want to do other things,like study, help parents do hoursework. Secondly, it's dangerous crossing the street looking at phones. Which can cause accidents. Last but not least, with the advant of the technology, fewer people would rather sit down to enjoy the beautiful, Therefore, we should put our phone down, then enjoy the world. In conclusion, each coins has two sides. So we should use phone reasonably.