2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

With the development of science and technology, more and more people are using smart phones. Although it bring us with convenience , we cannot ignoise its weak points. For example, many people cross the street, looking at their cell phones . I t is very dangerous that people look at phones instead of looking carefully around the street. As far as I'm concerned, any coin has two sides, we need to control the frequency of using the phone so that we can have a better life.