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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分41.5分
评语:

采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达贫乏,词汇拼写也不够认真。

用户练习作文:

Convention with others is a nature ability of out human ,early in our birthday we start convention with our parent and others so on, this convention ability make us become one of the hunam society no only bring us up ,also give us chance speack our word in the socity. convention is so important that we take much knowledge of out word from convention with others,this makes out culture,knowledge,art and many important informnation convenced bitween humans ,thats makes our society grow and be good and better. For out own the convention also unreplaceible ,we live in a convention environment ,we convention in work to do it better ,we convention with the public socity to be better live. after all ,conventon is absolutly one of the most improtant part of our society ,it connect every human in our society ,and make it working good

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