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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46206
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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As is vividly depicted in the picture above. The figure indivacte that the higher education degree the more wages. And the lower unemployment rate.From seen the picture, I think it is important for us to get education. Simply because people always think that less education degree has no technical to do these things. There are two mainly to explain these. One of the reason is that people who have higher educational degree, which means he or she has the technical and knowledge for the job. The other reason is higher educational degree can devote themself to thers fields with their knowledge or what they from school, which is good for their company. In conclousion, we should give everyone a chance, no matter is higher educational degree or lower.

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