句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
As we know, a lot of people tend to make a conclusion right now by what they hear and see. I think it a very unwise act. As a saying goes, no investigation, no right to speak. Sometimes what we hear and see is the fact, which needs us to investigate. Only do we such do, we can make a true conclusion. With the time going by, lots of conclusion maked immediately by what hear and see all proved to be wrong. And as us known, there are many unjust cases, which hapen because of more and less the act that make conclusions immediately only based on what they hear and see. Unjust cases destroy many families and people. In order to stop such things, everyone shouldn't make a conclision immedistely by what they hear and see. I do believe that our lives will be better if everyone can do it.
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