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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

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As we know, a lot of people tend to make a conclusion right now by what they hear and see. I think it a very unwise act. As a saying goes, no investigation, no right to speak. Sometimes what we hear and see is the fact, which needs us to investigate. Only do we such do, we can make a true conclusion. With the time going by, lots of conclusion made immediately by what hear and see all proved to be wrong. And as us known, there are many unjust cases, which happen because of more and less the act that makes conclusions immediately only based on what they hear and what they see. Unjust cases destroy many families and people. In order to stop such things, everyone shouldn't make a conclusion immediately by what they hear and see. I do believe that our lives will be better if everyone can do it.

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