拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文中的句子基本没有错误,可适当将文中短句合并为长句;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
As we know, a lot of people tend to make a conclusion right now by what they hear and see, which is a very unwise act. As the saying goes, there is no investigation, where there is no right to speak. Sometimes what we hear and see isn't the fact, which needs us to investigate. Only do we such do, we can make a true conclusion. With the time going by, lots of conclusions made immediately by what hear and see all proved to be wrong. And as us known, there are many unjust cases, which happen because of more and less the act that makes conclusions immediately only based on what they hear and what they see. Unjust cases destroy many families and people. In order to stop such things, everyone shouldn't make a conclusion immediately by what they hear and see. I do believe that our lives will be better if everyone can do it.
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