2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping Nowadays, there are more and more people go shopping online. Which has been an popular way. We can benefit a lot by going shopping online, such as it is very convient for us to buy something we want. And we can buy things from everywhere. However,people tend to buy things online, who will spend less time to go shopping outside. Which will cause people would rather buy things online instead of going outside. On the one hand. The stuff what we recivied which is distinctive different from showed on computer. It might confussed us. On the other hand, we willing to buy many things cause things on TaoBao which is more cheaper than store. Therefore, we will spend fortune money on TaoBao. All in all, we should shopping online reasonably.