作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.