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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

These days, quite a few people prefer to judge someone merely through their appearance. An impressive charming look, after all, is something of which one cannot easily get rid and is capable to make a long-term influence on one’s opinions in the future. Although objective factors like that are unvaried, we must acknowledge that a pleasing face can’t stand for everything. Numerous reasons will support my perspective. First of all, supposing that we tend to favor and aid good-looking people more than those with a plain face, then this phenomenon will spur the plainly looked to work harder so as to fulfill their self-worth, during which process one must fully complete one’s mind and inner sight and eventually become more valuable. Apparently, a wise man will not assess one’s value solely through its exterior by then. Moreover, advanced plastic surgeries are already able to modify one’s look to perfection. Undoubtedly it is unnecessary to crave for exterior beauty, which makes it indeed more absurd to judge by one’s look only. After all, only a smart brain can support us to run and develop our life properly, which is the very essence of life.

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