托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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This reminds me of the idiom, a coin has two sides, everything has its disadvantages and advantages. Basically,living around a lot of person means living with a crowded city or town for me, I would prefer to live in a rural area right now,there is fresh air, thriving plants,kinds of fruit trees, the space is so roomy compared modern commercial city that we can run on the village road and hill,go swimming in the pool whenever we like, the pace of life is slow, and even the food is organic, the neighbors are very hospitable,every morning birds sing songs,cock crow, and in the evening, frags croak,glowworms fly,and the sky is packed with winking stars.In the streams,we can collect small shrimps and crabs. I love this kind of life. However, My current workplace locates in a town where there are advanced transportation and tall buildings, It is too crowded as different provinces people come here to make a live.By average, each person has only 2 square meters to hang out for fun，parks, sports center, or the avenue. Although we can meet different kinds of people here, more opportunities to exploit ourselves, the society is more complicated, there are more crimes and deceits. Because the marketing becomes more and more competitive. I intend to live and enjoy my life in the countryside after my forties, but right now, it is my responsibility to take the burden of supporting family, I need to join the crowded group struggling my way,in another positive aspect, it is a preparation for a better life in the silent rural when I retire and step down.