托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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As the development of modern education, the existence of conventional classroom teaching method is always under dispute. Personally, I agree with the view that traditional classrooms will maintain in the future, especially in our society, where many different kinds of individuals cannot be taught by the same theory. Obviously, in classroom students can absorb the knowledge from teachers directly and immediately. To be more specifically, teachers’ body language, voice and movements can impress the children a lot more than the person on a screen. More important, there will be interactions between educators and learners. The facilitators can adjust their teaching content by adopting feedbacks from audience, which can definitely upgrade the affection of class. Furthermore, the students have their personal characteristics and learning abilities. The education on computer screen can only provides no-differences information regardless the needs of each individual. However, teachers, who have the specialized skills and first-hand experience could arrange courses combined with real situations in local schools, which play an essential role in the process of educating. What’s more, by marking the homework of each children, teachers can realize the extent that students intake knowledge, and design subjects according to these information. Admittedly, the improvement of education brings many new concepts and ideas in schools, like learning online, This is truly a more convenient choice for students to absorb skills. However, there are some disadvantages for this choice. In the first place, it’s difficult for people to concentrate on the person in screen, and they are easy to be distracted. Traditional teachers can supervise the students in classroom, but remote teaching lectures cannot. In the second place, sitting long time in front of a computer can post a great threat to children’s mental and physical development. They also need the conventional school to meet other friends in their age. In sum, the traditional education concept will pursue in the future because it can meet the individuals needs and obtain better teaching results. By attending classes in school, kids can experience more outdoor activities and develop themselves in both mental and physical health.