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Our parents teached us that we should help someone when people in trouble since childhood. However, sometimes we should learn to say "no“. For example, your friend doesn't want to work. tend to brrow some money, but never return the money. In that cast, you should say "no", cause it means you allow he or she doesn't need to work, what is worse, he or she will be much lazier. But some people afraid to say "no".On the one hand. Maybe they afraid that their friends might hate him or don't want to make friends with him again. On the other hand, people tend to say "yes" instead of "no" due to they think that they "no" would lose their face, people who might think they don't have the ability to do this thing. As far as i concerned, when people in trouble,we should help them, but the most important is we also should learn to say "no", tell people your feeling.
