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My hometown is Beijing, which is the capital of China. Unlike a ocean of years ago, when Beijing is a poor and out of style city, Beijing now develops rapidly as we all can see. If my foreign friend is about to go to Beijing, surely, he or she will fall in love with this city. As we all know, those developed cities are similar with each other. Therefore, it's a good choice that taking my friend to some national places which can show off the Beijing style. Going to Tiananmen Square is the most reasonable. There are so much important Chinese things held in there. For instance, the founding ceremony and the military parade. Behind the Tiananmen Square is the Forbidden City, of course, we can't miss it. With time going by, Chinese long history make the old palace more and more precious. The emperors of China lived there for a long time. So in this place, my friend must can feel the unique cultures of China. Obviously, it's rather possible for me to take my friend taste some Chinese food. For example, The Beijing Roast Duck and The old Beijing Noodles with Bean Paste. Compared with foreign pasta and pizza, I promise that my friend will prefer eating Chinese food. There are too much interesting places to introduce in here. What I want to say is, if my foreign friend really visit to China, Beijing will make he or she doesn't want to go back.