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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇基本功很好，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
The Chinese dream Dream, again and again. 5,000 yea rs of history carries a long dream of the Chinese nation, after the was removed, after several ups and downs. Today, into a dream, Chinese dream. In this era of knowledge change destiny, parents hope under the gaze of betting. To me, an ordinary high school student, my dream is very simple, my dreams are also dreams of my family--was admitted to a key University. I'm not a government official, I'm not rich, I'm just parents of the next generation, it is said: "you don't study hard, won not in the entrance examination, you win second generation, won the second generation? "Yes, I believe. So, my dream is very simple, is to study hard, admitted to key universities, give parents a good life, and become a useful person. I firmly believe that, through their own efforts, it will not be a dream, my hands slowly this dream become a reality. I believe that this is more than a dream, it also is each and every student's dream, is the dream of millions of high school students in China. Dream will bring together tens of thousands of high school students as a great Chinese dream, this is part of our China dream. When tens of thousands of parents to live a good life, when thousands of students to become pillars of the country, our China dream is no reason not to come true! "Ideal was plump, the reality is very skinny," Yes, fat is for those who are prepared, skinny people of the left and progress. When you are sound asleep in class, homework haphazardly, late for class, you get your ideal region was full. Dreams are not saying, and I have a big dream. But big dreams small effort now begins, self-study and 10 minutes earlier, remember a few words a day, stick to focus more on the class for a few minutes. Similarly, the dreams you insisted. So, when the dream is blooming at the moment, not think skinny skinny. Watch our aircraft carrier set sail, carrier aircraft took off, surveillance ships enforcing fishing island. Many people start boiling, stirring, shout out my dreams are together with our carrier guarding coastal areas, my dream, together with the coastguard vessel to safeguard our interests. I want to say is, those dreams are too far away from us as long as we now are achievable. But now my dreams have only one – to pass the University! Only the ground, can not go back ~ This is my dream of China, relying on reality, a very simple dream, a dream is not a dream!
