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I have very little friends. My best friend is my wife. But I often quarrel with her for some little things. She is a neat freak,I think. She clean the floor three or four times everyday. She will pick up or order me to pick up everything I dropped on the floor,just like hair, cake powder, scraps of paper and so on.