托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

It is clear that the power of countries like economic,education and military and so on is treated essentially by governments to strong their county.But there are tow distinctions between governments and citizens about what is the best way for their county on weighting these areas . Those governments believe that economic progress is the most essential and it should be the first goal for their counties.As for the importance of economic,it is true that every types of progress in a state can not be true without the support of economic.Particularly for developed nations,a country’s economic situation,is directly relevant to their citizens to live in a happy life.In these countries,the thing that most people care about mostly is whether their income progress can catch the rising of living cost. However,some people suppose that other types of progress have equally status as well as economy progress for a nation.With the development of economic,more and more people stat to care more about the quality of lives when they benefit more from the economic progress of the state.Such as education,entertainment or medical treatment,are also relate to everyone’s happiness,particularly to the rich which has more choices on better sources. In the nutshell, it is undeniable that economic progress is the financial support for other types of progress.On the contrary,other areas of progress can also drive the development of economy. I believe it is both important for a country and citizens to teat them equally in a long run,but it is also necessary for government to regard economic as the most important goal in a special period.