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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
welcome to China ,and the famous places is relevant to the delicious food at China so that you can enjoy eating when you traveling. it is the most interestingplace that is the xinghai-park at here which is located at the oversea and has many interests .most importantly ,there are not a lot crazy playing interests but the air is so comfortable when the dark coming. we can walk at the oversea to feel the sense of the sea , also we can play those intereing things that i have ever played many times when these at our sight. last but not least , it is nearby my home and there is security generally. i am so glad if you come here .
