2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

welcome to China ,and the famous places is relevant to the delicious food at China so that you can enjoy eating when you traveling. it is the most interesting place that is the xinghai-park at here which is located at the oversea and has many interests .most importantly ,there are not a lot crazy playing interests but the air is so comfortable when the dark coming. we can walk at the oversea to feel the sense of the sea , also we can play those interesting things that i have ever played many times when these at our sight. last but not least , it is nearby my home and there is security generally. i am so glad if you come here .