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Some people think that we benefit a lot from the internet. Simply because it is convenient for us to search informations from the internet. For example, there are many website that we can study on it. What's more, we also can send e-mails, which can make your work more efficient. However, some people think internet is bad because teenages would rather play computer games than study. Besides, they willing to spend fortune time to playing games, instead of sleeping. And they will sleep in class, impact score directly. I think interent is a double-edged sword. It is important for us to use it wisely. And parents should care more about their children.
