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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40869
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

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See this topic, I think I have seen a small video: there was a man running on the grass, and then he saw a girl sits on the chair, and draws something. Out of curiosity, he went to the girl, and said:" how beautiful what you paint." However, this girl ignored him. So this man was angrey, and ran away. Then this girl was realized that man, but he is ran away, so she wrote some words on the parper, " I am sorry, I can't hear what you said." As the saying goes, seeing is believing and hearsay is undependent. Maybe that's not right. There are two mainly reason to explain this. On the one hand, maybe it won't be right that you see at that monent. On the other hand, some people tend to listen to other's opinion. But maybe other's opinion is wrong, which is a fack news. As far as I am concerned, it is not wised for reach a conclusion by seeing or listening. We should judge others by heart, not only from the surface. Only in this way, can we build a wonderful world.

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