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See this topic, I think I have seen a small video: there was a man running on the grass, and then he saw a girl sits on the chair, and draws something. Out of curiosity, he went to the girl, and said:" how beautiful what you paint." However, this girl ignored him. So this man was angrey, and ran away. Then this girl was realized that man, but he is ran away, so she wrote some words on the parper, " I am sorry, I can't hear what you said." As the saying goes, seeing is believing and hearsay is undependent. Maybe that's not right. There are two mainly reason to explain this. On the one hand, maybe it won't be right that you see at that monent. On the other hand, some people tend to listen to other's opinion. But maybe other's opinion is wrong, which is a fack news. As far as I am concerned, it is not wised for reach a conclusion by seeing or listening. We should judge others by heart, not only from the surface. Only in this way, can we build a wonderful world.
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