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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用高级词汇；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the development of the economy and the technology, our environment has gradually been breaking. Especially, the largest environmental issues nowadays is global warming, which results in a great deal of the productions and the emissions of greenhouse gases and also leads to rises sea level rapidly and increases natural disasters frequently. Therefore, some measures ought to be taken immediately to protect our homeland. Not only should government improve policies and take action but above all we each are supposed to do what we can do in our daily life. For instance, promoting the usage of clean energy is a useful method to reduce pollution.In addition, it's walking as much as possible instead of driving that is beneficial to the improvement of the polluted atmosphere.
