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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17582
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

Talking about the Snap judgment, in my opinion, they may or may not be trustworthy base on the situation. Let me explain some of my reasons at below: On the one hand, we have to choose trust snap judgments even you don’t want to , like we go to hospital because heartache or whatever serious diseases, and the doctor tells you that you have to take a surgery to save life right now, will you trust the doctor or wait to think through first? Will the doctor always make the right decisions or diagnosis, Yes and NO, you will have chance to have life if you trust him! The soldiers in the combat zone are in the same manner, they have to take all the orders come from the commissioners no matter they are snap judgment or not, sometimes their judgment will bring a big victory! On the other hand, the snap judgments could be catastrophically affect if the decision is made without deep thinking, for instance, some people see that invest gold or stocks can make handsome profit, so they go to the market to purchase without investigate or do certain researches, and end up huge loss with pain. Likewise, some people decide to get marry when they meet each other for the first time, they thought they will be great couple and can make life better together, is that really true? The reality has been teaching us many lessons. Above all, just like the coin have two side, I disagree that the snap judgments can never be trusted but at some point I would love not to make snap judgments without wisely thinking end up with regret!

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