托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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I strongly agree that living in a rural area is much better than living around a lot of people in the city, I am excited to talk about some of the reasons First, the environment in rural place like a town or country side will be much better than it in the big city full of great amount of people. Air quality is better because less people, and it will not be noisy like the city, I really enjoy the quietness, I can listen to birds singing in the morning easily, more green trees, flowers or fruits you will see, you even can have your own front yard or garden, it is hardly to find a garden in the crowded city, the house is so expensive in the city some of workers can never afford to buy a house there for their life time. Second , the harmony atmosphere attract me a lot too. People are much nicer in rural place, they even greet to strangers and treat them very well with hospitality, that would never happen in the big city, I remember when I lived in city for so many years I even do not know my neighbor’s name and job, because so much criminals and bad persons around there, who knows you are trustworthy or now to talk, kind of sad to me. Third, the life and work style fit me well, less pressure and easy life, I could have a dog as a companion too, it is not easy to have pets when you live in big city, as you know, the big city usually always busy, high pressure, fast past life style, people pursuing money and try to not waste time to enjoy the beauty and their life even. They think they will have better life when they get rich, but to me, money is not all, life could be abundant if you can be content all the time. We really need enjoy our life and everything that God has created in such short time. That’s main reasons that I love to spend rest of my life in the small town or country side.