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文章词汇使用比较恰当，高级词汇积累不足；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nothing succeeds without a strong will As the saying goes: you won't ahcieve anything without hard work or great efforts. I think it is right. Because strong will is the important guarantee of successful. Only in that way, can we achieve our dreams. Hawking was found suffering from muscle atrophy can cause Lou Gehrig's disease when he was twenty years old. What's worse, the doctor said that he won't live much longer. But he chosen stand up again instead of giving up. Now he still live with stong will. Now he has made a great contribute in science filed. Besides, I think Hawking is very great, and i admired his spirit. So strong-willed people who can accomplish great mission. As far as I am concerned, Compared to others,it is easier for us to read books, study hard. Only in that way, that can we become a useful people.
