2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to my hometown. My hometown is Nanping where is a small and beautiful city. I hope you will like my hometown. First, I will take you to the Jiufeng mountants, it popual in nanping, when I was a child, my mom always take me to the jiufeng mountants. where have the park and the zoo. we not only can visit the wonderful views, but also we can paly with the animals in the zoo. I think you will like there. Secord, I will take you to the sihe stree, there are many shops in this stree, like the popual food shops and the coffee shops, we can eat the meat and the beef in this stree. I believe you will enjoy. Third, I will take you to the minjiang to see our mother river. we can take the boat in the river. we can visit the view in the bounds in the river. I look forword to you coming.