托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

可适当增加从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒。

Historians are telling us the only way can a country survive and thrive in the fierce competition is to find the right direction in driving its development, which however, is not an easy task. A number of authorities intentionally regard the economy as the most vital aim of their management, while some others insist that other categories of progress should share equal attention. There is almost consensus that a strong economy plays a critical role in the long-term prosperity of a country, as it serves as the fuel of other aspects of daily life. For members of the society, they will not have sufficient resource to support their families unless the rate of employment remains low and and the purchasing power of currency continues to level out. Another example here is the standard of medical service and education, both of which are elementary components of the community. If the government were not able to invest adequate money in such industries, it would face insurmountable criticism, and the stable condition of the society therefore will suffer. This investment, obviously is backed by a powerful economy. Nevertheless, admitting the crucial role of economic conditions never means to refer other progress to trivial issues. As some people argue, we need to pay attention to the possible unbalance in the development of our country. Never will a community achieve its full potential without enough highlight addressed on the leveraged governance. Again, the poor medical system will probably lead to spoil the well-being of the residents and pose a menace to the labor force as a whole, which aftermath, unfortunately, will eventually impede the vitality of a nation. To sum up, I agree that governments should emphasize the significance of economic development. Meantime, they ought to spare no efforts to bolster other prospects, in order to maintain the ability to compete worldwide.