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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9030
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

With the development of economy, the internet is developed rapidly. And there are some people learning on the Internet. Meanwhile, they think it's that all education they need. In my opinion, education doesn't simple mean learning to obtain information. Here are my reasons. Firstly, as we know,we learn what we need is important but it is crucial to use the information we get. Secondly, the information from the internet is also from others. It's limited. Sometimes, we need to find the information from the books. So I think, books are the basis of the internet. Thirdly, the information is always good for us. So we should learn to find the good. In a word, it's not enough to just get the education from the Internet. Sometimes, the things happened around you are also good education.

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