小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,his name is Huangguiyuan,he is very young and he comed from huangpu town zhongshan City guangdong China.he has a family and a beuatifull wife,a beuatifull daughter.he lifted here at small,he has two brothers.ther are lifted here too,we are often together something of sometime.however we are looked like brother.