小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒。

I have a good friend,his name is HuangGuiYuan,he is very young and he came from HuangPu town ZhongShan City GuangDong China.he has a family and a beuatifull wife,a beuatifull daughter.he lifted here at small,he has two brothers.ther are lifted here too,we are often together something of sometime.however we are looked like brother.