小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, his name is HuangGuiYuan, He is very young and he came from HuangPu town ZhongShan City GuangDong China.he has a family and a beautiful wife, a beautiful daughter. he lifted here at small, he has two brothers. ther are lifted here too. we are often together something of sometime.however we are looked like brother.