小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章衔接手法恰当；文中从句过少。

I have a good friend, his name is HuangGuiYuan, He is very young and he came from HuangPu town ZhongShan City GuangDong China.he has a family and a beautiful wife, a beautiful daughter. He lifted here at small, he has two brothers. They are lifted here too. We are often together something of sometime.However we are look like brother.