文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章衔接手法恰当;文中从句数量过少。
I have a good friend, his name is HuangGuiYuan, he is very young and he came from HuangPu town ZhongShan City GuangDong China.He has a family and a beautiful wife, a beautiful daughter. He lifted here at small, he has two brothers. They are lifted here too. We are often together for something of sometime.Sometime we are looking like brother.