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王明是育才学校八年级的学生，他想写一封回信给他在美国的笔友Nancy，介绍他的学校生活。词数：100左右，下面是一些要点，你能帮他写这封信吗？
5. 喜欢育才学校的生活。
简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，在词汇拼写也要再接再厉；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Yu Cai school we are studying in is a complex school. We learn five suject in total. But I like history best. At the same time, my english is not too good. Could you please help me improving my English. Our school has a reading week each term. Classmate like the reading week very much because we could read many book in museun. We often play basketball after school twice in a week. In total, I like the life in Yu Cai School.
