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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the development of our economy, we always pursuing fast lifestyles, like going into a fast food restaurant, taking the express train and arrange routine into every minute. We are so poor in terms of time. We always push ourselves hardly to our endless works and assignments, and we may feel tired and exhausted when we couldn't escape from such helpless situation. However, the only thing we can do is just to slower our lives pace? Certainly it is not. In order to higher our level of quality of lives, we need to have a careful, precise and executable planning. In the first place, we have to give up time-consumed ways to handle the difficulties we confront on the daily basis. For instance, as we all know, there are many shortcuts in computer operation, like pressing the Ctrl and C at the same time allows us to copy the sentences and words we need quickly and can save a lot of time. In the second place, it is essential to form the foundation of success to make a weekly plan, which would benefit us with good qualitied to complete our works and assignments. Take myself as an example, when I was prepared for my toefl exam, at first, I had no plan and weather to do review job or not dependent on my mood, and there are no doubt that it was very useless and it was definitely not guarantee a good grade. Then, I made a big decision to take a plan every week and take a criterion to exam the effect of everyday study. At last, I have confident to take the exam. Consequently, a good plan can help us to save precise and limited time to do other interesting things, like taking part in a family party, enjoying the music and so on. In conclusion, we need to keep fast paces to catch the rhythm of the modern society, in this case, the less the time waste, the better lives we live.
