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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第39篇:玩游戏是否能教你生活

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:51浏览次数:1398
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Playing games teaches us about life.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


玩游戏是否能教你生活。给出具体的原因并举例。

字数要求:300字以内。

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用户练习作文:

Those who think that play games cannot teach people anything might say that playing games is the waste of time. However, I agree with this statement that playing games can teaches us about life. There're two major aspects: what can we learn from playing games and playing games can make us relax. First, playing games can make us relax when we feel tired. In a sense, it is true that play many games may make us addiction. However, I think relax don't means we should play many games to make us addicted in games and it can make us forget our trouble if we play in perspective. Moreover, we can learn a lot of truth from games. For example, League of Legends is my favorite computer games and it is a type of teamwork game. So I can learn the truth that Unity is strength. In summary, I think playing games can teach us about life.

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