小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

Hello,everyone!My name is Jane.Come and see my good friend.Her name is Amy.She is a clever girl.She is tall and thin.She has long black hair and a pair of big eyes.She is really beautiful.She is our class class queen.She studies very hard.And she likes reading best.There are lots of books in her family.So she's got a lot of Writing Awards.She also likes listening to English recording.She says,Listening more to the recording can make my English better.Her family is so happy.There are four people in her family.They are her father,her mother,her bother and her.They seldom quarrel.Her family is also a model family in our class.She is warm-hearted, friendly and respectful.All the teachers and students love her.This is my good friend.What about your friend?Can you tell me?