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At the time computer was invented, scientists, astounded by its fabulous calculating speed, realized that they had created a miracle. Since then it has been believed that computer could do about anything. Therefore, it was gradually applied not only in academic areas like mathematics and physics, but also in crucial scientific domains like medical research and astronomy to substitute for the work of man. Accordingly, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of its marvelous capabilities. However, will humans be dominated by computers? As far as I can think, the answer is negative. Although a computer works much faster and accurately than man, which is beyond dispute, it is, after all, programmed and manufactured by human beings. Thus, those horrible scenes we see in science fictions that we humans be conquered by cold-blooded artificial intelligence are nothing but unrealistic delusions. The future of the computer is promising. With the support of it, we can do things that could never have been done before. Exploring the universe, interpreting mysterious phenomena and figuring out all that have been puzzling us for a long time are all made possible.