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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5734
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

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At the time computer was invented, scientists, astounded by its fabulous calculating speed, realized that they had created a miracle. Since then it has been believed that computer could do about anything. Therefore, it was gradually applied not only in academic areas like mathematics and physics, but also in crucial scientific domains like medical research and astronomy to substitute for the work of man. Accordingly, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of its marvelous capabilities. However, will humans be dominated by computers? As far as I can think, the answer is negative. Although a computer works much faster and accurately than man, which is beyond dispute, it is, after all, programmed and manufactured by human beings. Thus, those horrible scenes we see in science fictions that we humans be conquered by cold-blooded artificial intelligence are nothing but unrealistic delusions. The future of the computer is promising. With the support of it, we can do things that could never have been done before. Exploring the universe, interpreting mysterious phenomena and figuring out all that have been puzzling us for a long time are all made possible.

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