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错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
Students should not be a smart consumers As a student, our source of cost in daily life all out of our parents. Becase we have less time and energy to do a job. Therefore, we cannot extra burden to our parents. We usually save our money, for example collect all kind of loupons, join group-buy deals, which is not smart consume in some people eyes. Nevertheless, my view is contrary to someone. I think that as a student should save their money in daily life. Especially after we enter the college, our costs will increase as the times gone. Our entertainment activties, cost of life etc should use a lot of money than before. If we haven't chance to earn money to ease the burden for our parents, the first step we should learn and grasp the professional skills for future not learn how to smart consume. Then, students don't need the gorgeous costume to decorate theirselves, they should pay attention to their knowledges and the professional skills. In shorts, we should save the money for our partents and not learning how to be a smart consumers.
